Echoes of Shadow🥀

I am an avid reader yet am only beginning my journey in creative writing.I would appreciate any feedback on my writing as I am trying to improve my story quality.I look forward to being part of this writing community+attempting to develop my skills!🥀

Echoes of Shadow🥀

Flames 🥀

Echoes of Shadow🥀

1 min read

Tendrils of red swirled around me, snaking its way up the bones of the house. I gasped in long ragged breaths, my head pounding with the irregular beats of my heart. Fumes filled the air and I choked on the stale aroma. A thickness layered my mouth making my words garbled and cheeks chalky. I licked my chapped lips contemplating whether or not it was worth it.

Then I walked into the flames.

He...

Crime

Horror

Crassus🥀

Echoes of Shadow🥀

1 min read

Hands crusted with blood. Fingernails caked in dirt. A face stained with the trauma of death. A dagger with the slick crimson of blood slowly gliding over its deadly blade. I choked out a hystrerical gurgle before turning to face my mother. “I’ve tried to be what you wanted. This is who I am now.” My mother blanched at the words, her skin paling a ghostly colour.

“Amity-“ I recoiled at the sound...

Crime

Horror

Death🥀

Echoes of Shadow🥀

1 min read

A wail clawed at my throat and pushed at my lips. Then I couldn’t breathe.

My lungs screamed for air, but I was drowning. Water was in my nose, my mouth. Submerged six feet under layers of water and flashing lights. It swirled around me in a dizzying way. Staleness forced itself into my lungs, causing visceral pain to ricochet of my ribs and snake its wrathful body around my torso. Fingers of des...

Horror

Massacre🥀

Echoes of Shadow🥀

2 min read

From previous prompt. Not current. I went onto some of the older pieces of writing for different prompts and this one about Hades stood out to me. Sorry, I dont rly know about Hades but I know its something to do with death so I did a scene in a grave yard. Please dont be to critical with my writing as I am not that experienced however I appreciate feedback on things I can work on to improve my wr...

Poetry

Horror